This is an excellent story and I enjoyed it very much.
I loved the slow seduction by the seemingly, at first, obsequious Khazul and Haldir's battle of wits with him. I really liked how the balance of power slowly changed and Haldir became undone.
The eventual sex was so perfectly described and so sensuous. I think that every time I look at a pineapple from now on I will think of your story!
Thank you very much for writing this for me, I am thrilled to receive such a great story for the challenge.
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Date: 2008-08-17 05:18 pm (UTC)This is an excellent story and I enjoyed it very much.
I loved the slow seduction by the seemingly, at first, obsequious Khazul and Haldir's battle of wits with him. I really liked how the balance of power slowly changed and Haldir became undone.
The eventual sex was so perfectly described and so sensuous. I think that every time I look at a pineapple from now on I will think of your story!
Thank you very much for writing this for me, I am thrilled to receive such a great story for the challenge.
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