Well, Kenaz was more than happy, apparently, and from my own point of view, you created slowly unwinding scenes (I like that) with language that created character, atmosphere and visuals, time and place, and above all the emotions without relying on, 'he felt this'. You made associations of ideas that I loved, and to me it comes over poetically. You deal with love, and endings, and change in ways that moved me and it works :)
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2008-01-10 10:29 pm (UTC)