I spent most of my reading of this fic stunned by just how good a writer you are. I liked seeing what you did with the story, too. If I had to choose one element I liked best, I would pick out the banter between the two of them, their own natures present so strongly in their relationship and shown in their conversation and their feelings during the story. However, there is so much else to enjoy here. Rich, I would describe the story as, and the first comment maker's remark about scope is a perfect description. I am glad you liked it in the end.
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Date: 2007-12-27 04:38 pm (UTC)