I enjoyed this piece very much. The swordplay was well written, I could follow the moves without it feeling clinical, and I loved your Glorfindel. I liked your description of Erestor, by the way: 'he sat in shadow and observed more than interfered, but Glorfindel respected him for his uncanny ability to see through any situation to find the words that would calm discord before it reached a point beyond control.'
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Date: 2008-01-01 10:45 pm (UTC)'he sat in shadow and observed more than interfered, but Glorfindel respected him for his uncanny ability to see through any situation to find the words that would calm discord before it reached a point beyond control.'