I love the warmth between them, the fact that their love is solid enough not to have need of public recognition. I think they blend well together. I adore your Hal - you know that, of course - and I like this view of Elladan as a person in his own right, not one half of 'the twins'. Liked the way you filled in the background to their relationship and showed us Imladris' changed circumstances through Hal's midnight musings.

Very nicely done, dear. I don't if I told you that in amongst the technicalities.

*hugs you*