ext_120014 ([identity profile] hareatic.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] tolkien_slashy_swaps 2008-01-01 11:04 pm (UTC)

Hi Erfan!

Utterly fantastic story beautiful climax. The way you wove musical references into the tale. I truly loved every minute of it and got a bit chocked up over this line...."Lying there, luxuriating in every unrestrained demand Erestor was making on him, his musical composition entitled simply ‘Erestor’ wrote itself to completion in his mind without the least conscious effort on his part." Just perfect. And the humor was timeless. Hapless but beautiful semi-troubled Erestor. I'm looking forward to more from you!

Hare...

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